miércoles, 12 de agosto de 2009

The alone castle


It was a story night in an alone castle. It was in a camp. Me and my sister scape of our house because mum told us the castle´s story and it was interesting. We went into the big house. We heared a noise. It was a glass with wine. Then the lights switched off but we had a candle. The wind blew and it was very dark. My sister was afraid. She cried. We wanted to scape but a spirit stoped us. My sister couldn´t sleep. After she woke me up and it was morning. We went off the castle and went home. Our parents was angry and we laughed a lot because before we was very scared and now we can´t believe it.

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Santiago dijo...

It was a storMy night in an lone castle. It was IN THE COUNTRYSIDE. Me and my sister(MY SISTER AND ME) EscapeD FROM our house because mum told us the castle´s story and it was interesting. We went into the big house. We heard a noise. It was a glass with wine. Then, the lights switched off but we had a candle. The wind blew and it was very dark. My sister was afraid. She cried. We wanted to scape but a spirit stoped us and we were trapped. My sister couldn´t sleep. After she woke me up it was morning. We went OUT of the castle and went home. Our parents wERE angry and we laughed a lot because before we wERE very scared and now we can´t believe it.

VERY NICE STORY! WELL DONE!